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Monday 7 April 2014

Monday Quick Write

  this is a native story and I have put images at the bottom I hope                                     you enjoy this story.

                         the Super Hero saves the day

One super hero day New Years day. 2015 there was  hero's that need to save the human's. Hulk,Flash,Superman and Thor has a hammer that know one can carry and metal gear and a red cape . Superman has a red cape at the back of him and a blue hard sleeve shirt that has a S in the middle and he breaths could its like ice but its not and he has lasers on his eye and he can hear really really far its like he can hear from the whole world. Hulk has green skin and black hair he has the power to jump high and the power of strength. Flash can run very very fast he can punch and kick fast and hard. Super man go to space and hear if the human's need our help said Thor. Whoosh there go's Superman to space hearing people that needs  the hero's help Superman come's back to earth telling the other hero's that there need saving to do. lets go said Flash off they go WHOOSH flash runs very very fast Hulk jumps high and go's far Superman floe with speed and Thor used is hammer to fly. Suddenly Superman knew that they were getting closer and closer then the heros saw the trouble was at London bridge. There was three things that need to be done one there was a fire truck that was going to fall off the bridge and the fire truck was on fire and it had  4 people in the fire truck and some people robed a bank and the heros worse enemies first  hulk came and gave a little fright to the people and grabbed the fire truck that was on fire and pulled it back on the bridge and Superman took the fire out with his could breath and Thor said to the humans keep safe and keep out of trouble because and the people were cheering and the people said THANK YOU FOR THE HELP HERO'S . Then the heros and went to the place were the people that robed the bank they almost escaped but flash court up and pope the wheels and the people who robed the bank there car flipped over and Superman called the police and then the were in prison for 59 years the heros quickly captured the enemies and verst theme The heros did all they could defeating the enemies until the heros had victory then the heros won its over we have victory said the heros.


                     

2 comments:

Unknown said...

Cyrus you have lots of good ideas, well done. Your writing is hard to read because you have lots of fullstops missing. Please read it in a quiet voice so you can hear where the fullstops go.

Tai said...

Awesome work Cyus you did a really great on here and I really like Superman because he looks great on that picture.

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